As a consequence of a far too sensitive, emotional quake
I have been squashed beyond recognition
Under the heap of rubble
Spelt in bold, underlined italics as LOVE
In a yearning effort to brush away the scourging memories
I am in scour of a realistic soulmate
Who has been gifted the knack to pristinely express herself to
my humble being
And thus emboss ourselves in togetherness
as regards the immortal chapter better known as "LOVE"
Love is an eccentric commodity
Dwelling in the posh property of every lovable, fragrant soul
That is bereft of any vendor or purchaser
But lies as all and sundry's earnest desire
It is a wondrous flow genetically felt
That has in it's power an invisible, unique key
Which jimmies the hinges open on every spiritual cabinet
In an effortless desire to blossom the bud
of every enchanting romance
A much sought after phenomenon is what love is
That terminates the traumatic implore for passion
By solidarising an intimate bond
That has a vital component matching the opposite sex
All in all
Love in a nutshell
Is the cohesive exudation of romanticism
Blended with divine grace
And meant to remain embalmed for posterity
Note: This is a re-produced poem which was first published on the free city mailer, Margao News (in due course, it went defunct) around nine years back, and subsequently, was published on www.poetsindia.com on 5th May, 2002.
Its nice but a bit complicated to understand lol
ReplyDeleteSheffers, in my academic days, I used to write in a high-flown language, even my articles had a healthy sprinkling of uncommon words :)In passage of time, to get my readers to understand what I wrote, it resulted in simple, lucid language :)
ReplyDeleteOk In that case its fine & good :D
ReplyDeletewell, Sheffers .... u skipped the note. This particular poem was written nine years ago - was still studying :P
ReplyDeleteThat's intense!
ReplyDeletethanks Rachna,I was like that back then, and trying to be as I was in the past :) Am in <3 with your blog and have a lot of catching up to do. Will look forward to reading your thoughts as you get them published on this creative channel :)
ReplyDeletestarts with a surge to wow!!
ReplyDeleteAnd thus emboss ourselves in togetherness
as regards the immortal chapter better known as "LOVE"...beautifully descriptive...the only immortal element in our mortal lives is love only...though the language is bit complicated for "me" like people but i managed..:)
your words inspire neophyte writers like us:)
Nida, thx for the interesting comment. But say, your lingo is quite high-flown too, or perhaps the word usage here & there :)
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