The eyes were enveloped with mistiness
But it could not hold strong for long
And so the tears began to roll down
Telling the world its story of despair
Lest anyone would not be
Heartless to listen and care
As it swept the numbed cheeks
Stirring it in its wake
A deluge of bitterness and salt
For whosoever may be at guilt and fault
To be the connoisseur of its taste
How does it taste?
You may ask
I would reply
Like a Silent Lover’s Cry
love is like glass, so fragile that when it breaks; a thousand pieces scatter in all directions...
ReplyDeleteTrue. when love fails the eyes get wet and tears start falling. very nice feelings Basil
ReplyDeleteShort, simple and sweet. The way I prefer poetry.
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Very nice.
thx --- Parikshit, Himani & Aakash ... as always you guys have been very encouraging
ReplyDeleteTrue and touching.. :)
ReplyDeleteFlawless...It was like swimming smoothly. ♥ It
ReplyDeleteThx for the comment Vanshja ... it had pulled my heart strings alright :/
ReplyDeleteSayantan, that is quite a comment indeed. Feeling good to be appreciated that way
Its totally my pleasure :)) Just keep doing the good work :)
ReplyDeleteI had commented a day back from my mobile..looks like it never got posted! Strange!
ReplyDeleteWell, m so glad that you attempted writing this Dhaniya!
Keep spreading your wings farther!
Nothing is as solitary as a Lover's Cry!
Smooth and flowing!
Loved reading it!
Keep it up my dear friend!
Thanks again, Sayantan. In the short while since I have known you, you have been really encouraging.
ReplyDeleteAs for you my dear Dimple Dumplings ... such wonderful words coming from a born poetess speaks volumes and I will not stop at that. Yes, this was an inspired poem, but will imagine and write hereon ...as I have in the distant past.
Very well written
ReplyDeleteRegards,
Jahid
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